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Youthful Relaxation
By ARWander1600 aka ARColt67
(Pristine white marble floors and a polished oak counter can be seen as a young woman in her early 20’s walk in with a man in his early 50’s coming in behind them. The young woman is wearing a long green turtleneck and a black mini-skirt, she has blue eyes and long brown hair with a medium build and C-cup boobs. The older gentleman has a nervous expression on his face, he wears a tee-shirt and jeans and he has silver grey hair and the same blue eyes as the young woman who came in with him. At the front desk a beautiful Asian woman in her late 20’s with long black hair wearing a white tee-shirt which reads “Youthful Sauna” greets them with a warm smile.)
Asian woman: Welcome to “Youthful Sauna!” My name is Sanmo, is this your first time here?
Young Woman: It is our first time here, and I have reservations for my father Ralph McGregor!
Ralph: Mary, I appreciate this gift, I really do but are you sure you want me to do this, it looks a little expensive…
By: ARWander1600
4 responses to “Youthful Relaxation”
great story)) hope to see other contestents
Here’s a little bit of trivia for you other readers: when we were trying to think of a comic to do for Father’s Day, ARWander1600 came up with this story before I came up with ‘A Better Father’.
A Better Father is a wonderful story and comic, I am very happy that your story was made! I feel like Before School Program was closer to the point of a Father’s Day comic (which that one should be available soon) but A Better Father is still fantastic!
The least you could do is try to fix the post tags.