Well, that was pointless scene where he multiplies, and it deletes the one machine just made. Besides my little criticism, the comic’s good for what it is, and I give it 8/10. Would give it a 9 if she was his sister’s friend sleeping over and he didn’t shrink back, could have had a sexy sleep over. Maybe that idea could be in new comic, time will tell.
At first, I thought it deleted the original to replace him with the new one, but I double checked both frames and noticed nothing was changed as far as story went.
Well, that was pointless scene where he multiplies, and it deletes the one machine just made. Besides my little criticism, the comic’s good for what it is, and I give it 8/10. Would give it a 9 if she was his sister’s friend sleeping over and he didn’t shrink back, could have had a sexy sleep over. Maybe that idea could be in new comic, time will tell.
Well, the multiply and deletion idea was in my head for some time. Maybe not the best presentation but I wanted to include it 🙂
At first, I thought it deleted the original to replace him with the new one, but I double checked both frames and noticed nothing was changed as far as story went.